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Watching as you come undone
I see it clearly in your eyes
Like watching the fall of civilizations

Walls crumble
Oceans rise
Fires erupt
Skies break

Slowly... slowly you come undone
You're falling piece by piece
As the stripped armor reveals

Uncovered wounds
Silent stories
A caged animal
Raging, fighting

It is hypnotizing, really
How clear your eyes are
Windows to the undaunted soul

Shaken and cautious
Full of attention
Absorbing all detail
And retaliating back

Tell me, my dear friend
What has cracked you so
And released such a destructive beauty?
Personally, because of the image in my mind, I really like this one. Especially the last stanza!

I would greatly appreciate all and any comments, faves, ect. Thanks for reading! :)
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AnnamaeTezuka's avatar
Wow, I love the imagery.